This is a lovely alternate universe that you created here! I'm not usually one to read Enter/Hiromu, but I like the twist that you put on the AI creations here. It feels like an organic extension of the original story--a tweak and a twist--which is the best kind of AU, in my opinion. What would Enter be like if his main goal hadn't been to support Messiah/conquer the world but instead to protect?
There's some parts of this that would be fascinating to see explored in more detail--the relationship between Ryuuji and Heat, how to coexist with a program that is ostensibly for your protection but is also so very different and dangerous.
Jin's parts were fun, too. I could very easily see him running away to focus on the type of science that he wants to focus on, and it works out very well so far as providing a way to get Enter his own body.
Thanks so much for participating in the exchange! I hope that you had fun and that you enjoy some of the gifts that are posted.
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Date: 2014-12-16 10:16 pm (UTC)There's some parts of this that would be fascinating to see explored in more detail--the relationship between Ryuuji and Heat, how to coexist with a program that is ostensibly for your protection but is also so very different and dangerous.
Jin's parts were fun, too. I could very easily see him running away to focus on the type of science that he wants to focus on, and it works out very well so far as providing a way to get Enter his own body.
Thanks so much for participating in the exchange! I hope that you had fun and that you enjoy some of the gifts that are posted.